A good persuasive essay can get you heard, whether it's on the local opinion page or in the state capitol. Learn about the basic parts of a strong persuasive essay, how to prepare for and write your essay, what to avoid, and many handy tips for helping your work stand out.
Writing effective
persuasive essays is a key skill that you can use to get your voice
heard, whether in the newspaper, around the community, or among
professional organizations. Like all forms of writing, there is a
certain degree of finesse that comes only
with practice. However, there are a few key points to keep in mind
that can help you to craft a powerful essay even with a minimum of
experience. Clear, strong written communication gets you recognized
no matter who you are or what your level of education may be –
and anyone can become a good writer with dedication.
The Parts of a Good
Persuasive Essay
In persuasive writing,
there are three key elements to keep in mind.
The point
of your essay is the central reason why you are writing. For example,
if you are writing in support of local Amendment 5 to enforce a
neighborhood curfew on teenagers, your point might be that this
curfew would drastically improve conditions in the community.
The purpose of
your essay is decided mainly by who you're writing to – the
intended audience. While
your point would be that the Amendment is good or bad and why, your
purpose would be to persuade, to inform, or to otherwise affect your
audience.
Your support,
commonly known as the “argument,” consists of statements
that reinforce the point and purpose of your essay. Ample, objective
support is key to success in persuasive writing, and is more
effective than opinions or limited, anecdotal evidence. Most of your
writing will concern how to organize and express your support.
The audience is,
simply, the people you hope to impact by writing.
It is important to tailor your argument and use of language to
the needs of your audience. The essay you write to your local town
council will be different than the one you may write to the opinion
column of the tri-county newspaper, and will be very different indeed
from one you write to the mayor.
Bringing it All
Together
Brainstorming:
When you have an issue that you'd like to weigh in on, deciding on a
point and purpose is relatively simple. Determine who you want to
influence and why – if in doubt, ask yourself, what will be
the fastest route to the change I want to see? Before
writing, it is a good idea to make sure that you can state your point
and purpose in two simple sentences. If you can't express your point
and purpose naturally and with a minimum of words, you may have
difficulty formulating a readable essay. As a general rule, the more
strongly you feel about your topic, the more natural it will be for
you to write extensively about it.
Research:
Research your topic thoroughly. If you are writing on a political
matter in the local area, your town hall or public library can be a
valuable source of government documents relating to your issue. If
you are tackling something of wider scope, you will no doubt do some
internet research. A whole article could be
written on this topic, but in sum, be careful of blogs
and websites hosted on free services where public access is the norm.
Government or non-profit organizations sites and statements from
known, trustworthy public figures should form the backbone of any
argument; having your facts discredited will make your audience much
less likely to listen to you in the future. During research, also
keep in mind who you are writing for and make note of facts that will
appeal to their values and desires. You can emphasize these during
the writing process.
Writing:
Essays meant for public consumption will generally follow an outline
like this:
Opening:
The opening of any piece of work should grab the reader's attention.
There are several ways to do this. You may want to present an
interesting fact that will reel the reader in right away. Another
method is to ask a question, even if it is rhetorical (ex: “Who
doesn't like safety?”). Delve into your research – as in
our example, if statistics show a case for your position, don't be
afraid to start strong with something like. “Did you know that
most local street crime is perpetrated by teens after ten P.M?”
Support:
Everything between your opening and your conclusion will take the
form of support. You should strive for objectivity – that is,
an unbiased tone – in your support paragraphs in order to sound
more trustworthy and authoritative. Center your writing around
verifiable facts, and make the reader aware of where you found them
Closing: After
three to five paragraphs of support, your closing should succinctly
restate your point and purpose. Your closing paragraph is no time to
introduce any new ideas or facts, but you can use it to repeat your
strongest arguments. A good rule of thumb is, “First you tell
the reader what you're going to say, then you say it, then you tell
them what you said.” Repetition in the opening and closing
paragraphs is used to solidify your main arguments in the reader's
mind.
Things to Avoid
Anecdotes:
Anecdotes, personal stories that appear to support your position, can
ruin the reader's confidence in you if your experience is not
representative of his or hers. Before using a personal story, make
sure that what you are describing has happened to others. If you can
gather many people who have all shared a common experience that
strengthens your argument, you can use anecdote more effectively.
Ad
hominem (personal) attacks: Another
surefire way to make an astute reader question your credibility is to
attack the other side, whoever that may be. Do not succumb to the
temptation to call names or cast dispersions on your opponent,
whoever that may be. Though there certainly are people in the public
sphere who may be out for their own interest over anyone else's, the
strongest case is made by facts. Doing otherwise opens you up to
retaliatory mud-slinging.
Metaphor:
A strong metaphor, comparing one thing to another (ex: “Instituting
this new tax would be highway robbery”) can create an image in
the reader's mind that will stick with them. This can be both a
positive and a negative – make sure your metaphor sounds
reasonable and is well-stated, or the reader may stumble over it and
have difficulty focusing on what you're trying to say.
Wandering:
Once you have your point and purpose, stick to them. Edit your work
mercilessly to make sure that everything supports the point and
purpose and nothing superfluous or contradictory remains. Also cut
out extra wordage, if necessary. In general, the average person will
appreciate three short words rather than two long ones; this may not
be the case when writing to government officials, who are very used
to formality.
After Writing
Drafting:
Most professional writers, whether they are journalists, novelists or
anything in between, will tell you that a good piece of writing does
not happen overnight. Once you have written your first draft, it is
generally a good idea to put it aside for several days. After a week
or so has elapsed, look at it again, striking out anything that looks
extraneous or suspect. Remember that if you are writing to a
newspaper, there is limited space in each opinion column, and you are
somewhat more likely to be published if you can make your point
quickly. It is also a good idea to find a few trustworthy individuals
to proofread your document. If there are any points of confusion or
disbelief, work on those sections. I recommend making two or three
revisions to your work before mailing it, regardless of the intended
audience.
Presentation:
In all matters of written communication, strong presentation is
important. It can decide whether an editor decides to read through
your work, or a politician's assistant brings your letter to his or
her desk. Make sure that your essay is printed cleanly and crisply,
and that your envelope is filled out neatly and according to all the
standards of whomever you are addressing. Include a cover letter if
necessary. Don't forget to date and sign your work. Though there are
many newspapers who will accept opinion submissions through email,
most politicians can only be contacted through regular mail –
or, if they have email, are very unlikely to ever receive
correspondence sent that way.
In Conclusion
You are now on your way to becoming an accomplished writer of
persuasive essays. Along with public speaking, the persuasive essay
is one of the major tools of becoming a known figure in your local
community's political and social issues. You will find that the more
you read and write, the easier it will be to select words that
heighten the impact of your essay. This talent is universal to the
craft of writing and no less important than anything specific to
persuasion. Don't be afraid to take every opportunity to make your
opinion heard.